book review: Gangsta Rap
author: Bejamin Zephaniah
publisher: Bloosmbury, 2004
main character: Ray, aka “X Ray X”
Our story begins with a shouting match between Ray and his dad. This scene displays the anger, tension and miscommunication that propels Ray and his friends Prem and Tyrone to act irrationally and rudely. Later that morning, Ray explodes on his teacher and threatens him, I guess carrying the anger from home. Ray is permanently excluded from school as Prem and Tyrone already have been. We don’t really get to the root of Ray’s anger. We know that his dad drinks a lot, has a temper and doesn’t understand his son. We know that his mom does everything she can to hold the family together. At a final meeting before the boys are given their walking papers, they’re given the option of attending an alternative school. It’s a very new school, the mothers are skeptical, but it is seems to be their only hope of getting a diploma for their sons.
This school will build a curriculum around students career interests and for these boys, it’s hip hop music.
At this point, it’s easy to think that the boy’s main problem is a lack of male presence. While a poor relationship with their dad is a crucial part of the story (because little is more important to young men than their relationship with their dad) there is an abundance of men supporting these boys. Marga Man, a local record shop owner is their surrogate dad and manager. School administrators, business people and musicians all work with the boys to help them finish their education while they begin a hip hop career. Despite all that is being done to help them, the boys manage to maintain rather surly attitudes.
Almost too quickly, the boys release a successful CD. While they don’t get the glamour and bright lights that most Americans expect, they do begin to get attention and realize they have to surround themselves with people they can trust. They’ve been educated about the music business and are aware of contracts, obligations and all the work involved with maintaining success. They are also well read on hip hop, knowing its origins, messages and format. They want to be true British hip hop stars. The down sounds of the industry are presented, as the boys are dangerously used just for the money they generate. This bit of suspense is good for moving the story along.
I didn’t really like these boys, but I didn’t have to. I was glad to see them successful and did see them grow up a little bit, but they were not developed in a way for me to understand and accept them. I do think the story will give young people a lot to consider and more than that, it will give them hope of succeeding with their own dreams.


So these are white boys singing gangsta rap in England? Interesting…the plot sounds like it had potential, but too much rage for no reason can be tiresome…
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Ray is Black, Prem’s family is from India and Tyrone’s from Trinidad. The author is a black poet, so the lyrics aren’t bad. (Actually, I don’t listen to rap or poetry and am not much of a critic on this!). Marga Man is from the Caribbean.
I think the anger is there to justify the hip hop as an expression of young people’s frustration with “the man”. The first CD the group makes is all about their rage and as Ray’s girlfriend points out, to be successful they have to find something meaningful to say if they want to continue their career.
It’s not a great book, but it’s OK. I think more students will be confused by the Britishism rather than appreciating the commonalities.
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Don’t know what to think. I believe I received this book. If I have it, I’m going to ask a young man to read it and tell me what he thinks.
Thanks, Edi.
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Good idea, Susan. I do think it will have a different appeal to males.
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Just finished The World is Mine by LeFlore. Another hip hop influenced YA book. I liked it. Everything started rolling a little too quickly but the story moved at a good pace and the characters were likable.
I am happy I enjoyed it. There simply isn’t enough YA that features characters of color, for me to dislike anything. So I hate when I have to.
Edi- I know you said you didn’t like the boys but do you think teenage boys would?
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They may understand them better than me. I don’t understand being angry at everyone and everything just because, and making sure everyone knows you’re angry. I don’t think there was a moment in the book where I laughed or even smiled.
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I’m not saying I didn’t like the book, I do think it has possibilities. I do think it could appeal particularly to male teens. I liked that the education system was working with the students to give them what they need, it was interesting to see Marga Man so selflessly help the boys and the budding romance was kinda sweet.
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Where is yinka from and were do they take her to be burred
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Mozarena,
Might you be working on a homework assignment?
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